✨Kia ora everyone, my name is Alofa and this is one of my great epic paragraph stories that I have✨ created in Room 23. Room 23 and I have tried to use a lot of adjectives and different story starters.
🦋Including imagination and detail! Hope you like it and have a great day!🦋
Happily, the man prepared to go for a swim and explore the wide waters. He hurried to the seashore, slapped his goggles onto his face, balanced to put his flippers on and set free into the water. SPLASH! The man obviously didn’t think that he was going to have a humongous fish coming towards him! As he happily swam, the man did a terrifying discovery, a big terrifying Whale-Shark was swimming hungry towards the man! He shivered!
Kia Ora Alofa It's me Rita from Rm 24 And I really like your story and how descriptive it was and I also like the picture it looks funny.
ReplyDeletewhat animal will you use in your next story?.
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Kia Ora Rita, thanks for commenting on my blog. And what a great question! The next animal I would probably do next is maybe another fish!
DeleteKia Orana, Sophie.
ReplyDeleteLast term, my class was looking at pictures that had giant sea animals in them, I never knew how beautiful giant creatures were. So that's probably what inspired me to write this story.
Have you ever done a story about giant animals?
Thank you for your positive comment!