Hello everyone, this story is about a creature that has beautiful eyes, but what people didn't know about it was that it was deadly. (Beautiful But Deadly) I hope you all enjoy this story! Stay Safe, stay warm, stay kind and stay happy!
Its eyes were beautiful, but the inside was furious and deadly for what nobody noticed…
The creature dragged itself out of the dark green swamp as if it was a couch potato.
The creature stared into the child’s eyes as if they were in love, and snapped his mouth fast, as if it was flash’s pet.
But what do you think the creature bit?
Was the child in danger?
Hi Alofa, Your story about the creature that has beautiful eyes was magnificent! It was very interesting!
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Kia Ora Alofa, your story was very interesting because I loved the part where you said "It's eyes were beautiful, but the inside was furious and deadly for what nobody notice". I hope you stay safe and stay happy.
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Hi Alofa, your stories are just so amazing, even the title. I don't even think that a adult can write something like that. Stay home and Stay safe, blog you later!😊
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DeleteKia ora Alofa your writing was very interesting and wonderful. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteI don't think a teacher can't write something awesome like that.
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