Tuesday, 11 August 2020

The Delivery

Room 23 has been learning to use words that end with 'ED' and 'LY'. So this is my writing called "The Delivery". And it's about a girl named, Midnight who loves gazing at the beautiful moon. The hard bit of making this story was trying to make the girl more interesting with her adventure and yeah... I hope you all enjoy it because it was really hard to make!


         

Curriously, Midnight ran outside, into the forest and stopped where the moon’s spotlight was.

Amazed, Midnight looked behind her as if she found some glowing gems. But instead, it was the 6 moons! Midnight picked up the closest moon and held it up to the sky. Gracefully, the moon floated back into the beautiful night sky.  She did the same thing with the rest of the moons but left off with one of them. As Midnight walked exhaustedly back home, she saw the 5 moons in the sky facing to all of the poor homes. She stayed up all night, gazing at the 5 moons that were in the sky.  As Midnight looked at the 6th moon that was behind her, it was glowing as if it wanted to go back into the sky. So she set of back down to the forest and held the last moon into the night sky and it was like joy spreading around the whole word. 

  
I hope you guys liked it! And thank you for visiting my blog and reading this blog post! 
Blog you later!

2 comments:

  1. Xin chao Alofa,thank you.

    John

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    1. Hi John. Thank you for commenting on my blog!

      Translation: HI john, cảm ơn bạn đã bình luận trên blog của tôi!

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