Tuesday, 25 August 2020

Loyalty or Aggressiveness?

 



Suddenly, The ground in the white house started to rumble, then civilians glared at what had been destroying the ground. The Giant opened its eyes and widened his mouth as if he was eating a big bowl of ice-cream, and scram! 


The giant lifted himself out of the hole that he came from, and started pounding his chest like King Kong! Loudly, the giant stepped onto a tree and snapped all the little twigs as if they were tiny ants eating his leftover pizza!


Braved, the mayor rushed outside, hopped into his car, and beeped his horn at the giant. 


He looked FURIOUS! The giant threw a tree at the car, barely hitting it! The mayor drove off, distracting the giant so the troops would shoot it.


But the giant didn’t hurt the troops...It went on both knees and faced his eyes closed down at the lawn. 


It looked like the giant may be loyal? But why would only throw something at the mayor? 


What do you think?


3 comments:

  1. Hi Alofa. I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked your description of the giant but most importantly the questions at the end.

    I think that maybe the mayor has made a decision on something that the giant was not happy with.

    Thank you for sharing your work with us. I look forward to reading more. Well done!!

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    1. Thank you Ms Tuipulotu for commenting on my blog post. That is a good answer for the questions at the end! Thank you for sharing your ideas on why the giant only threw something at the mayor!

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  2. Hey, Alofa! I really like your writing piece! I think you're very talented. I think the giant was trying to protect something! What do you think? How long did it take to make this story? If you want to check out my blog, feel free to! https://odsmaiag.blogspot.com/
    Hope you like my posts!

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